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NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 31. Happy International Transgender Day of Visibility! What trans author has inspired you the most?</p><p>With unwarranted ego, myself. A hard working, under appreciated trans author. Trans, <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/transmasc" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>transmasc</span></a>, <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/transfem" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>transfem</span></a>, <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/lesbian" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>lesbian</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/bisexual" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>bisexual</span></a>, <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/asexual" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>asexual</span></a>, <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/otherkin" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>otherkin</span></a>, etc. characters.</p><p>New chapter each week.</p><p>Join Ume &amp; her family as their relationships develop. In a creepy world where “love” never dies.</p><p>pixiv.net/novel/series/11417104<br><a href="https://archiveofourown.org/works/52770025" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" translate="no" target="_blank"><span class="invisible">https://</span><span class="ellipsis">archiveofourown.org/works/5277</span><span class="invisible">0025</span></a></p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Trans" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Trans</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/TransgenderDayofVisibility" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>TransgenderDayofVisibility</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/sapphic" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>sapphic</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/KonbiniIdol" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>KonbiniIdol</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/TDOV" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>TDOV</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 30. Do you label your works as LGBTQIA+? Why or why not?</p><p>I label my work “yuri” which by definition is about women’s relationships with each other, either romantic or romantic adjacent. I label it as such because that is my target audience.</p><p>Sometimes, depending on the material and platform, I use sapphic, sapphic romance, lesbian, or trans. Because if you don’t want to read that, then you shouldn’t, it just gets you bad reviews.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Yuri" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Yuri</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 29. How do you handle foreshadowing? How do you navigate building up to the ‘big reveal’? Part 3</p><p>Since much of the more subtle foreshadowing is done by brief comments, the character drops they are sometimes in error. That means when something else happens, I may close off the Maguffin with a character comment like, “Wow, I wasn’t expecting that, so much better than what I thought would happen.” Conversely, “That sucks. I wish...”</p><p>This is most likely when I have a problem I am still working out a solution for and the I suddenly find a better solution. Or I wish for the character to be incorrect. I like to establish my characters are not infalable narrators.</p><p>I would give an example, but it would be a spoiler.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 29. How do you handle foreshadowing? How do you navigate building up to the ‘big reveal’? Part 2</p><p>I have also used the blatant but cryptic announcements of some future event with just enough hints that once it happens, the reads say “oh-yes it was about that.” It might be a little heavy-handed (I am basically saying “Look, this is foreshadowing.”) but it works. But’s better then the device I sometimes see of “Statement about something,” then thrid wall break of “But, I will tell about that later,” of “That’s another story."</p><p>The big clue is best used with a long gap and the big reveal is a rabbit out of the hat. And shouldn't over used. It's so obvious that the reader is going to remember.</p><p>An example: Ume cryptically says that Tomo needs to talk to Ume’s Kami protector about something. The 2 volume later, wa-la Kami drops the bombshell on Tomo. <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 28. Happy Respect Your Cat Day! Who or what accompanies you when you write? </p><p>Rindy stays under my desk most of the time unless she is hunting for food, which is a full-time occupation with her. <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Dogs" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Dogs</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/dogsofmastodon" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>dogsofmastodon</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/dogsOfPixelFed" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>dogsOfPixelFed</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/dogsofbluesky" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>dogsofbluesky</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 27. What’s the strangest situation or place where you’ve written?</p><p>Writing in the accounting office above the factory where I worked while a beer bash was taking place downstair on the factory floor. <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 26. About which format or style choices are you the most uncertain? Part 2.</p><p>From a different point of view, I don't get this "deep" business. I understand the words, but somehow I can't picture it. Then again, I am happy with narrative 1st and 3rd. I would struggle with 2nd. <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 26. About which format or style choices are you the most uncertain?</p><p>Not sure if any. For my work, I usually apply Occam's razor. Cuts down on the work and worry. For publication, I just use whatever is specified.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 25. Describe your workflow if it had to be 100% analog. Part 3</p><p>Looks like I don't understand the question. I still don't but I can see how others are answering it.</p><p>Without computer technology, I would tell myself stories and they would go no further. I have a variety of cognitive challenges that affect how words and spelling co-exist with my brain. Computers make it possible for me to function as a writer instead of just a storyteller.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/dyslexia" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>dyslexia</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/actuallyautistic" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>actuallyautistic</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 25. Describe your workflow if it had to be 100% analog.</p><p>As pseudocode (No bug reporting accepted.)</p><p>Main Program</p><p>1. Invent plot device<br>2. Design major characters<br>3. Chart major milestones<br>4. Invent title<br>5. Write chapter rough<br>6. Run edit routine:<br>7. Submit to Beta Reader 1<br>8. Run edit routine<br>9. Summit to Beta Reader 2<br>10. Run Edit routine<br>11. Let sit until day before publication<br>12. Run run edit routine<br>13. Publish on AO3 and PIXIV<br>14. Promote on Fedi and Bluesky<br>15. If Book not complete Return to 5<br>16. Else return to 1.</p><p>Edit routine<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I For Beta feedback<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;1. evaluate suggestion<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;2, if accepted edit<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;3, End For \\ Returns to evaluate if still sug.<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;2. Run base edit routine<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;3. Run extended edit routine<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;return</p><p>Base edit routine: <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;1. &nbsp;For draft not clean Edit by reading out loud with Language Tools and ProWritingAid running.<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;2. End For \\ returns to 1 if not clean</p><p>Extended edit routine<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;1. Edit in ProWriterAid with Gammarly running.<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;2. Edit load into Quillbot<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;3. Edit Using text reader<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;4. If edit count exceeds base tolerance return to subroutine line 3<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;5 Else Exit</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 24. Is there a particular reader you keep in mind when you write?</p><p>In order<br>1. Me<br>2. Fans Otherside Picnic<br>3. Fans of Yuri and/or Japanese creepypasta/mythology/urban legend.<br>4. Lovers of Japanese Literature, especially light novels<br>5. Everyone else<br>6, Terfs, fascists, religious bigots, bigots - enough to stick in their eye but not get murdered.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 23 March. What’s the most memorable encounter you’ve had with a reader?</p><p>Yeah, no. </p><p>First, my reader are rare as hens teeth.<br>Second, I am close to being a Hikikomori (Shut in by social anxiety) so I don't get out much.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 21. Happy World Poetry Day! Share your most poetic line. Part 2</p><p>I also sometimes wax lyrical like these lines:</p><p>The sky sang of azure depths and glittering stars, the trees intoned mantras to the sun and the Buddha, and the earth crooned a lullaby, saying, “It’s winter, time to sleep.”</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/KonbiniIdol" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>KonbiniIdol</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 22. What distracts you the most from writing? How do you deal?</p><p>You all. You're all the worst!</p><p>I keep writing till somewhere between 12 midnight and 2 in the morning Pacific time when YOU all go to sleep.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> 21. Happy World Poetry Day! Share your most poetic line.</p><p>I write hiaku, waka and Katauta. So I would never be able to pick. People seem to like it. This one that appears in my WIP that has been popular:</p><p>Sacred tea<br>Amid the rocky hills<br>Wander sits<br>Beside lonely fire<br>Distant Memories</p><p>It also appears in my second collection<br>"Waka to Katauta (和歌と片歌)"<br>At: <a href="https://archiveofourown.org/works/63339307" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" translate="no" target="_blank"><span class="invisible">https://</span><span class="ellipsis">archiveofourown.org/works/6333</span><span class="invisible">9307</span></a></p><p>Below is more waka &amp; haiku as Haiga which can be found in one of my pixelfed accounts</p><p><a href="https://pixelfed.tokyo/i/web/profile/574345021382074749" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" translate="no" target="_blank"><span class="invisible">https://</span><span class="ellipsis">pixelfed.tokyo/i/web/profile/5</span><span class="invisible">74345021382074749</span></a></p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/PoetsOfMastodon" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>PoetsOfMastodon</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/PoetsOfPixelFed" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>PoetsOfPixelFed</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Waka" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Waka</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/%E5%92%8C%E6%AD%8C" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>和歌</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Poem" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Poem</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Poetry" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Poetry</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Haiga" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Haiga</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/%E4%BF%B3%E7%94%BB" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>俳画</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Haiku" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Haiku</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/%E4%BF%B3%E5%8F%A5" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>俳句</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Senyru" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Senyru</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/%E5%B7%9D%E6%9F%B3" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>川柳</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WorldPoetryDay" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WorldPoetryDay</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 19. What’s your narrator’s sense of humor like?</p><p>Ume is witty but often plays the straight man to Tomo. She will engage in edgy teasing banter with Tomo and usually comes out on the short end of the stick, but she is good humored about it.</p><p>She is still trying to figure out how much teasing and joking around she can do with Shishi who has a more fragile personality.</p><p>When Tomo is the narrator, we see this same dynamic without him realizing how cutting some of the comments are.</p><p>He does appreciate when Ume scores a point on him, though.</p><p>Shishi as a narrator, has not yet to reveal much of a sense of humor. One snarky remark is all. She is too focused on mentally gushing over Ume. <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/KonbiniIdol" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>KonbiniIdol</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/writerscoffeeclub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>writerscoffeeclub</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/writing" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>writing</span></a> 17: Does alcohol intake influence your writing? Part 2</p><p>I learned that programming while under the influence wasn’t effective. I imagine the same is true for writing no matter what 30s writers of hard-boiled detective novels might indicate.</p><p>My characters also don’t write under the influence. But we get to see several scenes where they are intoxicated, sometimes with positive results and sometimes not. (Usually positive for Tomo and Ume. Usually negative for Shishi. And Positive for Kan-chan except for that morning after hangover.)</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/KonbiniIdol" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>KonbiniIdol</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 18. Happy Awkward Moments Day! What’s the most awkward moment you’ve ever written?</p><p>Shiro: We once went out to a club, and I thought we were having fun. I complimented my girlfriend on her looks and she broke down crying, asking if that was all I saw in her. Very awkward since we were in the middle of a scene. Also awkward, because it made me realize I never complimented about anything else.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/Girlfriend" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Girlfriend</span></a> <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> March 17. Does alcohol intake influence your writing?</p><p>Mine or the characters?</p><p>I don't drink.</p><p>Some of my characters do, and it can affect what I write.</p><p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>
NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi<p><a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/WritersCoffeeClub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WritersCoffeeClub</span></a> Day 16: What word or phrase do you tend to overuse? Part 3</p><p>I am doing the same thing with "was" as I was (did) with "could", using it to change a present tense word to past tense. I notice I do the same thing with my internal dialog. It may take me time to find a new balance. <a href="https://sakurajima.moe/tags/NMWCC" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NMWCC</span></a></p>